news!!

early this morning, about 5 am, I was suddenly inspired to write a scene, for a m/m book.
I did amazingly well, I think, esp. considering how early it was.
I typed it up, and sent it to a couple groups, to get people's opinions, and constructive criticism.

It went over quite well. I was told there are some typos, but they're fixable. I sent the scene to the person who alerted me to them, and she's going to put the corrections, in an email, to help me out.

I appreciate all the replies.

This is the reply that means the most, though, as it's from an actual author, who happens to be one of my favorites:
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Mychael Black :

Okay, finally got a chance to read it. :)
Overall, it's hot as hell and has a ton of potential!
;)
The only "criticism" I really have is that a few of
the actions are almost clinical or technical. Maybe go
for sensations (heat, tightness, etc) instead of
simply describing the actions themselves. :)